Adjustments of animated nights
Dawn breaks long too early
Flooding sandy reminders to lids of eyes
Cigarettes and coffee conscious
A contest entry
- quickie IX by Salty Hibiscus.
350 points, ended February 4, 2009, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is great. I love short works. I agree with it immensely, I am quite an insomniac. I love the line
"Dawn breaks long too early"
it was wonderful.
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Thanks again for your comments
it's nice to know someone gets where you're coming from.
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Well done, I reallay aliked this, cigarettes and coffee conscious... great, love with blessings John
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great take on the prompt. the combination of both are wonderful and often necessary. thanks for sharing and good luck.
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