Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Caution

Days of sunshine, days of joy,
we laughed, we cried,
it was each others company we enjoyed.

Life couldnt get any better, when its already this sweet,
but theres a storm in the distance, an invitable defeat.

which way to turn, which way to go?
do i let my true feelings show?

its a dark foreboding, a warning for caution,
my roads are diving into a new crossing.

so until that time, ill enjoy this time,
and immerse myself until its untimely demise.

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • redhanded
    February 6

    Edit | Reply
    very nice write you have here, and great take on the prompt. best of luck to you in this contest and in the future.,
    andi
    (redhanded)