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Make Believe

Hello there, and welcome
To my Island in the sky
I sail around the lofty blue
And touch clouds as they float by

You'll really like my Island
With it's rolling hills and dales
All the beautiful flowers
And hay rolled up in bales

There are a lot of horses
Donkeys and llamas to see
You can help me feed them
And water the trough for me

The next time that I sail your way
Be ready to visit my Island and see
All the beauty of make believe
Where everything is free

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 13, 2009

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    Ah..very sacred tone and the true immages of the soul you have is here ..love the message and praise the approach you created here..well done...


    • Katie Lazette
      February 13, 2009
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      I used to pretend with my Nieces and Nephews years ago. We always had lots of fun. Do you remember the song Pretend you're happy when you're blue....I think Nat King Cole recorded it. It was quite popular.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 8, 2009

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    Thank you for this entry in my contest.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    This was sweet and touching.

    Best of luck to you with it.

    Riftkin


  • Lady Michaella
    February 5, 2009

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    wow..this is such a beautiful poem.. i feel so tranquil when i read it. i feel so happy. its really a great and exciting poem to read. a great job with this!!

    http://www.adherents.com/lit/comics/img/s/SailorVenus.jpg


  • Brazos silver member
    February 5, 2009

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    It is wonderful to be able to keep the ability to make believe we had when we were children; you seem to have done that!

    Beautiful write, good luck in the contest.

    Brazos


    • Katie Lazette
      February 5, 2009
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      Thank you Brazos. How very kind of you to say that. I love to make believe but I don't have any little ones anymore to make believe with.


  • ennovy silver member
    February 4, 2009

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    Ah this just a beautiful take on the picture I saw...and you did this so well....I think you have been there before....smile and excellent write...Novy

    GodYou


    • Katie Lazette
      February 5, 2009
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      Thank you novy. I've been in make believe land many times. A nice place to be. Take good care of you.

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