I saw my future in her eyes-
It was as empty as her soul.
So why did I choose to stay-
Why couldn't I just go?
Like any other human in love
I was too blind to see that it hurts from the srart.
So why couldn't I walk the other way
So I could save myself a broken heart?
I know she doesn't love me
And she's looking for another.
So why did I let myself believe
That we would last forever?
I know now that love is an illusion-
It never lasts forever
And it can break the strongest of hearts...
So ehy can't I stop loving her?
Author notes
This is for my ex fiance', Amanda.
Any title suggestions?
Comments
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This made me a little teary-eyed because I've been through this myself. My ex-fiance Nerissa treated me like i was absolutely nothing in her life. I loved her so much, and put up with her bs for 6 months till I accepted she'd never change. she'd never be a better person and treat me right like i hoped so much. sometimes we get with the wrong people, the good thing out of this is we learn things for the future people we meet. i might of gotten a broken heart from her (and other issues) but the one thing i got that was good was to see signs for future people who'd treat me wrong like she did. don't think love is an illusion sweetie, you'll find your special girl. we both will, just give it time. I'm sure she'll be coming to us both soon. great job on this piece, deep emotions like this are good to get out. keep up the writes *big hug and kiss on cheek*
much love
~~Victoria/Tori~~
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i so love this...verey powerfull and emotional...not ina bad of...in a way...mainlly i love this poem...not becuse of the pain in it..but becuse these are Q alot of poeple have and you bring them to life with this poem...oh and the verry last sentance you prissed the E key insted of the W...it happends
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