Have you ever fallen in love
Just to realize they'll never care?
Have you ever felt like crying
But knew you'd get nowhere?
Have you ever watched the one you love walk away
And begged them to turn around
Then whispered "I love you" softly
As millions of tears fell to the ground?
I've cried all night in misery
And begun to go insane
And I've come to realize that there's nothing in this world
That could ever cause so much pain.
If I could choose between love or death
I know I'd rather die.
Love is fake- it onky hurts-
And the prica you pay is high.
There is one thing that I have learned-
It's to never fall in love.
You'll be hurt before it's over.
You see, I should know...
I fell in love with you.
Author notes
This is for my ex fiance'
Any title suggestions?
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All I can say is I can relate to this (Nerissa made me feel the pain you feel from Amanda) I'm so sorry to see you had to deal with this. it hurts me to see someone feeling that way about love, i use to think that way too. Things will get better hun, i promise. Trust me, you'll find someone that'll love you the right way. Just as I hope to find my person as well. good job with the write, I think it's fine as is. keep up the writes.
*hugs and kiss on cheek*
much love
~~Tori~~
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Oh yes
Love--lol- Is fleeting--- But isn't it the falling. That we love the Moste---- It's hitting the ground that Hurts.---- This piece is Great!
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wow this is realy good..your a verry good poet..the flow is grate....and i kind of no what your talking about...but dont tell nobaody!!...hahahahahaha!!!!..oh and in the 4th stanza last sentance i think you ment to say price...when instead you said..prica....^_^
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Thank you. I wrote this and didn't even realize I wrote it. It hasn't been edited at all
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