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Give and take!

I lend you my love to make happy your life,
hand you my heart without hesitation,
serve up my soul believing it safe,
offer you my trust with no trepidation,
bequeath you my body and all that befalls,
I freely and willingly give you my all.

Yet in return I ask this of you:
Love me each day and hold me each  night,
keep each promise you make to me,
trust me to always do what is right,
live each hour like it's you last,
Leave your past in the past.



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  • love it

    from now on i wont make a promise if i cant keep it and to b honest no girl can ever replace u n i will leave my past n the past n i have always trusted you to do whats right