Emotions...
flowing out with the tide...
woosh...sadness
woosh...discontentment
woosh...lonliness
then cleansing...
and in with the tide...
woosh...happiness
woosh...laughter
woosh...thoughts of you
Are we finding our rhythm together?
Will you walk beside me
down the sandy beach of life?
The warmth at our feet,
and the love in our hearts?
Or is this a passing tide in our lives?
Author notes
The pic is mine, August 2008 Headlands Beach, Mentor, Ohio
A contest entry
- The river of life by Angelo di Luce.
430 points, ended February 27, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
Comments
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One thing for sure I know, salt and water are powerful cleansing agents, and I am serious in this statment
Mind you tides are a bit dangerous
Sweet write, nice thoughts
Thank you
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A very nice look at beginnings and all of the questions held within. Tides, like flames ebb, the issue is whether one has the patience within the water to find the balance.
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the beach is a healing place
have you read Ann Lindberg?
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