Not so long ago notice was served to man; so
listen all you heathens for the good of
the worlds land.
Angeli-cs dwell among us observing our
many toils, desired sins....high upon
some-a-where this legend I must share.
They come one spirit at a time
I have heard their songs of our laborious
sorrows worries and pangs.
While dwelling in man center city high above
the glass, bricks.... smog... dirt... grime, filth.
When it rains don't you feel their tears
again, interloping with our fears.
Embracing intermontane man-made
mountains on an oasis of piety.
If this genesis fades to darkness
hell shall surely ripen rapidly.
Vile wicked creatures increasing your
pleasure until the end of days.
They know our weakness and ways.
Demons will destroy new Eden never to bloom
again in all her beauty...so man must learn
God loves us forgiving each
stage life plays.
Author notes
credit artist: Modern_Magic_by_alexiuss
picture inspired
My fantasy is of angels, watchers, demons & soul stealers.....
In a list
A contest entry
- Fantasy Writes Wanted by Riftkin.
400 points, ended February 8, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Who's dwelling is this? Could it be an angels?
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Thank you for this entry in my contest.
I enjoyed reading it.
Such a great story you have spun.
Best of luck to you with it.
Riftkin
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that is a magnificant photo!!!! applause for that and the beauty within your words as well. thank you for sharing such powerful writing with me today. may i suggest that you change the period here: When it rains don't you feel their tears
interloping with our fears. to a ? again, thank you for sharing thi with m e as i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you ahve entered. looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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fantastic
The know our weakness and ways. This line really stuck out for me. very scary situation. If anyone knew earths weaknesses we would be invaded and earth might be distroyed. nice flow of words, a pleasure to read.
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wow.. this is really good. a brilliant and really original take on the prompt. great job
best of luck in the contest,
-Lemon Bee-
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Great fantasy darling, some how the words "no man is an Island" shouts out of this to me. In truth, we are not alone in the universe.
I love you, good luck in the contest.
Brazos
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wow
full of wonderful imagery and fantastically told by a master storyteller!
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