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Venus' Star

From Venus I came in spirit
lovingly sweet, kind
Taking humans on secret journeys
within my poetic mine
Truly romantic, my heart speaks
vividly in laments written
Talented woman full of life by
m' poetry all are smitten
Enchantress, adoring, imagery
sings silent but bold
Touching all emotions softly
engraving wanton goals.

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1959 ... "Venus" by Frankie Avalon

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  • Riftkin gold member
    February 9
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    I love this. you are amazing to write this one.. sorry I had to delete my contest.

    Joann


  • Angelflower
    February 5

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    this is really beautiful. I love the flow and the imagery.. so softly read.. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 5

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    very inspiring poem. Wonderful flow of words. From venus, I came in spirit. lovinly sweet. I just love that line jumped out at me, It was a pleasure to read


  • Brazos silver member
    February 5

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    Ah, Venus, so that's where my muse came from...I knew you had something to do with it.

    "Engraving wanton goals", now there's something to hold on to; maybe even better than poetry!

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 4
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    mmmmm..

    m' loving your tender sweet words m' friend..bravo on another exceptional piece of 'art'..

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