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Thank you

Thank you


It's Time for me

To move on
Hang up my cap
Adjourn to pastures
New, and far,
Known only by name

Yesterdays count no more
Or Tomorrows, neither,
Until Eternity fades

And so I say a
Last and final Thank You
Love, Always

X  Ev {o!-}

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What I have, I don't want...
What I want, I can't have...
So what's left......?

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  • nanaox
    February 6
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    lovely ev

    lovely ev but never farewell


  • eyesofanangel524
    February 4

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    My dear poet...this is a sad saga. You have said your Good-byes nicely with an imagery that leaves one feeling your sorrow and pain. Often in life we seek what we cant have and despise what we do. As many, I know this feeling all too well. In regards to your question of whats left? Life no matter how short or how long is what is left. Love of family and friends, laughter, tears, sorrow and pain. All of these things remind us that we have another day to achieve what we might have overlooked. Find comfort in something that makes you smile...no matter how little and draw from it. Best to you dear poet.

  • Nobodysboy
    February 4

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    climb out of your depression and transcend, help urself you've got a friend to the end,, and thats a lot ya know, at least stay friends with people geesh