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You Could Have Stayed.

I felt your heart beat inside mine,
Your murmering for me.
There was no place to hide,
It's not too hard to see.

You could have stayed a little longer,
Made my heart beat a little stronger,
You could have kissed that graze,
Lured me out of this, please.

I felt your breath on my face,
Your breathing for me,
It's coldness out of place,
We're not falling free.

You could have stayed a little longer,
Made my heart beat a little stronger,
You could have kissed that graze,
Lured me out of this, please.

I felt you touch my arm,
Frosty and with care,
You protect me from harm,
But your not really there.

You could have stayed a little longer,
Made my heart beat a little stronger,
You could have kissed that graze,
Lured me out of this, please.
You could have stayed.

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  • I Love It!!. The repetition is brilliant!.
    thanks for entering my contest and goodluck. xx
    Meggen