I'm just a child of the universe,
for that soul has pulsed in rhythmic cadence
long before my design.
Yet my birth
was a celebration to harmony
and I was balanced on the wind.
My coming was known,
yet not the time
and at my dawn
there was a sigh of completion
and an awakening,
where an empty space
was now coloured in
and each day more fulfilled
than the last.
But I am only one.
What of the others?
They are all awaited with awe,
to nestle into another space,
a vacancy in the grand design
in the clan of the cosmos.
And so it revolves and evolves
into consciousness
Author notes
One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.”
~William Shakespeare
In a list
A contest entry
- To Touch A Cloud by poet2angels.
700 points, ended February 6, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is inspiring as all your pieces are. I am left with a subtle soft fulfilled feeling at the conclusion of this one, you make me want to write like you although it will never happen. Brilliance my dear. Congratulations on your bronze
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Oh!
I love this!
"Yet my birth
was a celebration to harmony
and I was balanced on the wind."
This is such a perfect expression of the meaning of the prompt....That is exactly how I would interpret the quote and your piece is breathtaking and spiritually draws the reader in ...
Excellent!!!
Lynda
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this is really great, it sounds so smooth, i could never get my own poems ot sound this cool. really good job!
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Beautiful
Great job, truly wonderful to read.
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really well done, i enjoyed the read you did well with the quote
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WONDERFUL !
This Is a beautiful and lovely piece, a total joy from start to finish
Well done !
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You are always a few steps above and this is no exception...it is amazing in flow and depth...how creative and wonderfully written for the quote...it is all you and simply brilliant.
Love,
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Brilliant!
This was one of those works that will linger on my mind and inspire me! Thank you!
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This has gots to be a winner!!
"And so it revolves and evolves
into consciousness" and this line sums it all up beautifully, well done once again
All the best to you
Ken
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Excellent
This has such lyrical quality. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow, what a wonderful take on the prompt. But you always amaze me with your incredible poetry skills.
Best of luck in the contest hun
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