Pulling answers
from wells
in your eyes,
words topple
between waves.
Colors poke
my diced skin
while you perform
avalanches.
Author notes
Prompt: Overload
20 words,
25 minutes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Yay, another quickie by Merry Christmas.
460 points, ended February 4, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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burried>>> buried?
you nailed it again! dude what a goldsnatcher you is
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omg! thank youuu! i cannot believe i did not notice that
hehehe. 
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" Pulling answers from wells in your eyes"
I really love that line..it expresses soooo much.
A wonderful write, congrats on the Gold.
Very well done.
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wow...
amazing how you can fit so much into few words.
Perfection.
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Right on.
Wonderful lovely.
Love,
jin
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Wow. Just wow. This spoke to my heart and found it's way into my soul. Each line is so different from the last but they all work together so well. Amazing.
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aw wow this wonderful good luck in the contest
maralisa
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you said so much with little words... good luck
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aww loverly, gold here you come well done
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hehe, this is great, performing avalanches, thats spiffy! i really like this alot, and good luck sissy
Stephanie ♥
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