I SOCIETY
©copyright 1989 Bonita M Quesinberry
I sang a song and gained fame.
I wrote the words and became a household name.
I invented great wonders and accepted the glories.
Oh, this I society and its puffed up stories!
It thinks it is free to fly,
yet, in bondage it struggles to try.
I healed the soul, body and mind,
for you see, I am a special kind.
I built rockets and flew to the moon.
Why, I even developed the flowers that bloom.
oh, this I society and its self-acclaimed wonders!
You well tremble, for God’s wrath greatly thunders!
I am judge, jury and executioner of law.
Before I, even nations tremble and fall!
Why, pray tell me, who is better than I?
I, who can cast the mote from your eye.
Oh, I, be damned and committed to hell!
For the devil’s number you have and his name you spell!
Truth is, I created whore mongers, murderers, liars and cheats,
only to fall by the wayside, I— lying in defeat.
I— cannot glory in itself and claim belief,
nor out of its mire can it dredge up relief!
For all that is created, invented and healed,
the glory to God, or I— won’t be heavenly sealed.
In a list
A contest entry
- Society Menders by StormyDawn.
600 points, ended February 4, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cut to the face by Sacred Geometry.
400 points, ended February 26, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Man must give up his arrogance or perish
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Meet myself, me and I...so many of us have been caught up in it, hope others will see through this piece you have written and shared. Well penned of course! Blessings.


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Oh My Word~
Wow~ I read this several times and it brought me to tears
~ Powerful Powerful piece with a message to grab the reader to the core~ Love how You presented this and I held onto every word~ Bravo!!! Excellent~ Gold!! Gold!! I am keeping this one to read again~ 
This verse can relate to all in some way -shape or form- just taking the time to read~ 
It sinks in
You have Blessed me my Friend- The Best Christian Spiritual writer I have read to date and I learn much from Your words- Thank You

Flawless rhyme as always Precious

Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~


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Thank you, dearest Desire, for once again encouraging and lifting me up to keep me speaking loud and strong and unafraid to say God's hard words, even when man's smooth words are shouted in an effort to smother my words from the ears of those who might hear. So often, it all seems an effort in futility; but, as the Spirit has said, "Bring even one to the Lord and you will be called great in heaven." Just one and I'm good to go!
Luv & hugs, SisBon

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Oh, I love others that speak the truth without fear. To whom much is given, much is required. You don't grasp what that means until you ask and it's given. Shalom and nicely done.


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Wow. Very spiritual. Best of luck
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Thank you, Dawn, for stopping by!
BonnieQ
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