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~empty

empty kisses,
in empty arms.
walls built up
for so, so long...

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  • individuality gold member
    March 25
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    ah the walls we build sometimes in the name of love, or love fading perhaps as resentment or complacency runs amok. a good poem.


  • individuality gold member
    March 13

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    well i guess we all get to feeling some resentment at some time or other in our crazy lives, tis the norm of existence


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 26

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    Yep.. I know this feeling well. A lot spoken in a few words.


  • Johnny Wheeler
    February 16

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    Empty kisses in empty arms...So much is said with so little words. This speaks volumes to me. Great write Stomps but then again I hope it's not personal.
    Johnny


  • LionessK silver member
    February 4
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    i have no words...
    just applause.


    • stompsalot
      February 5
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      awe, thanks!! acknowleding the resentment is half the battle. learning how to or not to respond to it is a whole nother ball game!

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