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me, unlike a bouquet.

i kept asking i
kept begging for you to
rearrange me,
like a bouquet, all my
sharp cuss words and
flat black addictions until i
fit with you perfectly you
tried your hardest for
awhile but then gave up the
pieces couldn't fit right
no matter what you did, right
face wrong time, you walked away
frustrated and i fell inside
the imprints of your feet
in the ground straining
stretching to fit the holes
you left both in me and in the
world i had made around
myself but i tore with the
effort and all i could do
was just fall
through

sup

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  • DemonBoy
    February 5

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    one. giant. run on. sentence.
    I love it. it made the entire experience seem like the blur I'm sure it is by now.