i think i love your blaze,
feeling your hand on my
shoulder,
because days keep slipping by,
slowly and with old winds growing
colder
with every huff of breath
against this tempestuous
tundra
we call growing
older.
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Very well written. You are a talented writer, with a strong sense of voice. Overall, the poem was good; I specially liked the end, but all parts were good. Well done
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i love it too , a very good write and i love your user name to it is a very sweet name, this is a creative write that says so much without saying too much.
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thank you so much! =]
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Love it!
Very nice love poem, esp. of growing old.
Good luck!
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Thanks for reading! =D
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