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Unity of Nature's Glow

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Breaths inhaled through butterfly wings.

As fingertips reach fire skies

Sun-beams grace earthly desires.

Love’s angels exhale their soft sighs.

 

Heartbeats flutter harmony’s tune,

Swaying in winds of gentle swirl

Golden souls soar among us high,

Pathways pave where faithful unfurl.

 

Illuminate me with your sun,

Mother earth reign on me once more

So I’ll be a vessel of hope,

Cleansing my thoughts within heart's core

 

I long my weary soul to glow,

Loving each other tenderly,

Under one golden sun of truth

This is a dreamer's destiny.

 

Upon the wings of prayerful praise.

Author notes

Picture Prompt, and Quote inspired!

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.”


~William Shakespeare

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 8
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    Sad eyed Tim, this was worthy of gold


  • queenie
    February 7

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    definitely another winner. the structure of this makes the flow so graceful. the rhyme pattern shows uniqueness. you are my poetic hero because you rescue words from being mundane.


  • jimek
    February 7

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    Very good

    I liked the part,I long my weary soul to glow,loving each other tenderly.Under one golden sun of truth,this is a dreamers destiny


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 5

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    omg this is so beautiful and every line here is sheer beauty and magic. I truly adore this...
    Sigh~
    Your poem reflects the artristy of nature's brush

    Lynda


  • earthstar
    February 5

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    Love it

    I loved your use of mother earth being part of the Native American Indian clan. I use to hear stories about mother earth and father sun. My mother did not tell me till later in life. Many of my friends are like part Indian we have shared our customs with one another. I think will love reading this poem. They read some poems on my computer while working on it. They read some of my work. Great job I hope you do well my friend and brother.

    Love and hugs
    your sis Brenda


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 4

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    wow each stanza spoke to me in ways i can't describe without bringing back the tears. I embrace your soul with mine as you have been know to lift me up from my darkest of nigh's like a gentle zephyr awakening the light of new found hope. well done and many loving blessings always xxxxx


  • dutch2lips gold member
    February 4
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    impressive


  • Mad Pastor Grovell
    February 4

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    I needed to get out my magnifying glass to read this one! Pastor Grovell advises you to get a bigger font. And (as a priest) I know all about fonts as I have one of my own in the church.


  • Angelflower
    February 4

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    this was really beautiful.. so soft and gentle, it read so smoothly.. Such a poetic beauty this write.. You always show your soul through your writes.. a talent so rare.. wonderful piece..

    Angel


  • poeticpieces
    February 4

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    Such a beautiful poem.

    I love these lines dad:

    Heartbeats flutter harmony’s tune,
    Swaying in winds of gentle swirl
    Golden souls soar among us high,
    Pathways pave where faithful unfurl.

    Illuminate me with your sun,
    Mother earth reign on me once more
    So I’ll be a vessel of hope,
    Cleansing my thoughts within heart's core



    Beautifully penned, ofcourse, you're a Weaver~
    Love your son, Tim Jr.

  • oldpoets
    February 4

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    The print was a bit small. Us old folks so have a problem with this. But! every word was worth the effort to read. This write is very well written with uncommon skill. I enjoyed every word.


  • Lonely
    February 4

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    Such an inspirational write Tim! I loved it.. It was like a fresh breeze, like many of your poems.. I have a similar destiny too my friend

    Love you so much
    Lonely


  • rite
    February 4

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    Peace and kindness often seem so far out of reach in this world. But we will never stop longing for it and therefore one time we shall have them and enjoy them like little children. Thank you for creating and sharing and the best of luck in the contest.


  • Denerica
    February 4

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    Fantastic

    Fills the heart with warmth, renewal, hope, I feel this is worth it's weight for the gold.Rythmic and goes well with the pic prompt. Was blessed this morning by it. Blessings.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 4

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    Beautiful imagery, always elegantly written. Your words stay true to the picture. Thanks for sharing!


  • Amera gold member
    February 4

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    This poem is truly wonderful! Each line made my mind explode with imagery. It's filled with motion, soft sounds and passion. It flows like honey off the reader's lips. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • trekkergirl
    February 4

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    I only have one complaint... these eyes aren't what they use to be and your small print and type made your wonderful poem very hard for me to read. But what I could make of it... after straining my eyes was a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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