Neurotic noises
thundering pulsatively
through forehead...
a mental clogging
repetitive in nature.
Flashing lights
focusing
reflecting
white medical walls.
Imagination unveils
sweat dripping
a little too late
~a newborn dies~
Author notes
Prompt: Sultry
30 Words
Here, the sultry is refered to as a choking feeling due to heat rising from within.
Thanks for the prompt.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie cos everyone else is doing them..7x30x30 by Cannonsfire.
1050 points, ended February 4, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey preets, long time no read. Been ages since I checked in I know. Oh this is dark but beautifully crafted at the same time. A lot said in a shortish piece but I think thats all thats needed with this poem. Very well crafted and thought provoking. Love Claire
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this is a very dark and sad write thank you for letting me read and congratulationsfor winning a trophy.
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Thanks!
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Captivating and so starkly sad
C
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Thanks cannons
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interesting take on the prompt, i'll give you creativity here with some nice images to go with it
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Thanks!
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