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Queen of Darkness

Missing image

Forever Spiraling,

Down Into The

Depths Of

Hell

.

She Will Rip Out Your

Heart, Trap Your

Soul, As

Well

.

The Queen Of Darkness

Shall Reign Forever,

No Mortal, Can

Resist Her

Spell

 

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy

Picture Prompt ~ Queen Of The Lost Souls By~anarchyannie666@deviantART



Gold, Silver, Bronze

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  • oh very interesting! and very scary at the same time. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • i love this.
    it flows so well and the format is unlike iny other ive seen, well done
    thanks for entering


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 20
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy you liked my write.


  • I know this girl, I think she is in me. You captured this so perfectly. Well done here. Best to you in the contest

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 6
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and if she is in you; wow for you.


  • name spaced out plz. can read. will b DQ'


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 28
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      Thank you so much for the Bronze Trophy, but most of all, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



    • Maxboy gold member
      May 25
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      Spaced out as you asked, sorry I didn't know.

  • Another great write thank you for entering and good luck!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 24
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Rheea gold member
    May 18
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    well you scared me!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 20
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your comment, I am happy you liked my write.


  • Wonderful imagery, you're very talented.


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 28
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • SEXY PICTURE! Wonderful wrote . I wouldn't mind being captured by her . Well this had good rhyme in places, I felt that it could flow better but overall it was wonderful to read. that you very much for entering my contest and the best of luck to you

    <3Damien


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 13
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      Thank you very much for your comment, I am happy you liked my write.


  • Oooooh, I like it. I like it a lot. I think it's powerful and uses great emotive language. I love "She will rip out your heart, trap your soul," it's brilliant. Well done, great write!

  • I Love this poem and ur picture
    well written and goog luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 4
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Jepardy
    April 26
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    Nice write. Very dark and with a nice flow to it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 26
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Riftkin gold member
    April 16

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    Best of luck in my contest..
    This is just the first time looking at all
    the poems in my contest .. please do not respond.

    Riftkin


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 17
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your comment, I hope you liked my write.



  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 11

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    Ooh dark, fiery & fierce!
    This was wonderfully
    written, and nice BG
    to go with it

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 12
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • i loved this and i agree with the comma's being needed though you did a great job and gave such personality to the picture. great work

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 10
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and thank you for your help.



  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    With a few commas, this piece could be perfect. I loved the picture especially. It really fit in with your piece. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 9
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.



  • vampireblood
    April 9

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    This is a really good write. I like the picture you chose for this to. I'd have to say the second stanza was my favorite. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
    ~Vampy~


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 29
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.



  • ItaloEtkin
    April 6
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    very nice poem... this works well


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 8
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      Thank you very much for your comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • This is good. I love the whole dark fantasy theme of this- great job and good luck. Great take on that picture.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you so much for your great comment, I am very happy you liked my write.


  • a very nice write. thank you foe entering anf good luck in the contest.

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 2
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you very much for the Gold Trophy and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You Again


  • condor gold member
    March 28

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    quite an interesting write on the picture prompt and i must say, one that really fits quite nicely. Love your words and how you managed to put a touch of danger in the piece. The setout of your words in a pyramid really gave it a feel of spiralling into the depths of darkness. Well done and i wish you the very best for the contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 29
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      Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comment, I am happy you came by.



  • Catacomb
    March 28
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    Nicely done. (going to be a hard contest to judge) thank you for entering


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 11
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • • if you would please space your name out in your AN like this : X x D r o w n . M e . D r y X x . Just out a space between each of your letters. Please. If you chose not to thats fine but i would like you you give me a reason. Thank you for putting your username in you’re an but I need it spaced as previously specified.


  • lovingpoet
    March 28
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    now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck


  • lovingpoet
    March 24
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    well done very cool write and thank you for entering the contest


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 5
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      Thank you for your applause and wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • ichigosama
    March 10

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    ichigosama

    well done. sounds like a dark horror movie that i would love to watch. very good imagery. great job and thanks for entering!!!


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 12
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am happy you liked my write.



  • rainyday woman silver member
    February 17

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    I love the picture and your words fit it well. Very dark when you stop and think. Thanks for entering this contest.
    Cheryl

    • Maxboy gold member
      February 17
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am so happy you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Again


  • tears.of.silence
    February 4

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    Lovely

    I love the picture.. my first thought was wooooooow nice! Then I read your poem and it was short and to the point... and I was like yep I can see the picture in this poem and the poem in the picture so excellent work. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you.


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 9
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 4

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    OOh rhyme! I like rhyme A very neat piece hun, love the air of darkness this holds, I like darkness to Excellent take on the pic, good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 4
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment sweetie, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.



  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 4

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    excellent~

    Wowzers
    This is excellent
    Love the pic and the background as well
    Aye indeed
    No one can resist the Queen of Darkness spell
    Best of luck in the contest
    It's a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

    • Maxboy gold member
      February 4
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      Thank you so much for the comment sis, I thought you might like it, be well and stay warm.

      Love Ya Sis
      Big Bro


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 3

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    Dang I like this picture and your piece goes so well with this! Good luck to you hon


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 4
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      Thank you very much for the great comment sweetie, I am very happy you liked my write.



  • doolie gold member
    February 3

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    WOW!!! I love your dark write. Your background and picture are perfect for your words. I also like the form of your write. I love it all. Great job sweetie.
    Best wishes in the contest.

    Love You


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 3

      Edit | Reply
      Thank you sweetie for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Love You Too

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