Forever Spiraling,
Down Into The
Depths Of
Hell
.
She Will Rip Out Your
Heart, Trap Your
Soul, As
Well.
The Queen Of Darkness
Shall Reign Forever,
No Mortal, Can
Resist Her
Spell
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Picture Prompt ~ Queen Of The Lost Souls By~anarchyannie666@deviantART
Gold, Silver, Bronze
In a list
- #2~Trophies ~ SILVER • next in list
- #3~Trophies ~ BRONZE • next in list
- Dark • next in list
- #1~Trophies ~ GOLD • next in list
A contest entry
- Come as you are by rainyday woman.
1050 points, ended February 17, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewite Contest by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
475 points, ended April 2, 94 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Different Promptz (EXTENDED!) by Unknowing....
575 points, ended May 27, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come take a look! please?? (rhyming contest!) by nobodys-girl.
400 points, ended July 16, 237 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
Comments
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oh very interesting! and very scary at the same time. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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i love this.
it flows so well and the format is unlike iny other ive seen, well done
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Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy you liked my write.
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I know this girl, I think she is in me. You captured this so perfectly. Well done here. Best to you in the contest
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and if she is in you; wow for you.
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name spaced out plz. can read. will b DQ'
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Thank you so much for the Bronze Trophy, but most of all, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Spaced out as you asked, sorry I didn't know.
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Another great write thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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well you scared me!
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Thank you very much for the applause and your comment, I am happy you liked my write.
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Wonderful imagery, you're very talented.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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SEXY PICTURE! Wonderful wrote
. I wouldn't mind being captured by her 
. Well this had good rhyme in places, I felt that it could flow better but overall it was wonderful to read. that you very much for entering my contest and the best of luck to you
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Thank you very much for your comment, I am happy you liked my write.
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Oooooh, I like it. I like it a lot. I think it's powerful and uses great emotive language. I love "She will rip out your heart, trap your soul," it's brilliant. Well done, great write!
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I Love this poem and ur picture
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Nice write. Very dark and with a nice flow to it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Best of luck in my contest..
This is just the first time looking at all
the poems in my contest .. please do not respond.
Riftkin
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Thank you very much for the applause and your comment, I hope you liked my write.
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Ooh dark, fiery & fierce!
This was wonderfully
written, and nice BG
to go with it
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Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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i loved this and i agree with the comma's being needed though you did a great job and gave such personality to the picture. great work
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and thank you for your help.
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With a few commas, this piece could be perfect. I loved the picture especially. It really fit in with your piece. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.
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This is a really good write. I like the picture you chose for this to. I'd have to say the second stanza was my favorite. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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very nice poem... this works well
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Thank you very much for your comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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This is good. I love the whole dark fantasy theme of this- great job and good luck. Great take on that picture.
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Thank you so much for your great comment, I am very happy you liked my write.
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a very nice write. thank you foe entering anf good luck in the contest.
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!!! WOW !!!
Thank you very much for the Gold Trophy and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write.
Thank You Again
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quite an interesting write on the picture prompt and i must say, one that really fits quite nicely. Love your words and how you managed to put a touch of danger in the piece. The setout of your words in a pyramid really gave it a feel of spiralling into the depths of darkness. Well done and i wish you the very best for the contest.
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Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comment, I am happy you came by.
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Nicely done. (going to be a hard contest to judge) thank you for entering
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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• if you would please space your name out in your AN like this : X x D r o w n . M e . D r y X x . Just out a space between each of your letters. Please. If you chose not to thats fine but i would like you you give me a reason. Thank you for putting your username in you’re an but I need it spaced as previously specified.
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now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck
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well done very cool write and thank you for entering the contest
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Thank you for your applause and wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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ichigosama
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I love the picture and your words fit it well. Very dark when you stop and think. Thanks for entering this contest.
Cheryl
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!!! WOW !!!
Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am so happy you enjoyed my write.
Thanks Again
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Lovely
I love the picture.. my first thought was wooooooow nice! Then I read your poem and it was short and to the point... and I was like yep I can see the picture in this poem and the poem in the picture so excellent work. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. -
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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OOh rhyme! I like rhyme A very neat piece hun, love the air of darkness this holds, I like darkness to
Excellent take on the pic, good luck
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Thank you for the wonderful comment sweetie, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.
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excellent~
Wowzers
This is excellent
Love the pic and the background as well
Aye indeed
No one can resist the Queen of Darkness spell
Best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Thank you so much for the comment sis, I thought you might like it, be well and stay warm.
Love Ya Sis
Big Bro
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Dang I like this picture and your piece goes so well with this! Good luck to you hon
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Thank you very much for the great comment sweetie, I am very happy you liked my write.
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WOW!!! I love your dark write. Your background and picture are perfect for your words. I also like the form of your write. I love it all. Great job sweetie.
Best wishes in the contest.
Love You
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Thank you sweetie for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
Love You Too
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