99 bars compared to singularity
words with devastating clarity
atomic bombs
leave minds to abstraction
rewinding your distraction
alternative songs
twisting broken visions
retracting inane decisions
vanity, come along
witness my visual ways
that teach dazzling word plays
en masse'
upon the world-wide stage.
i don't spit to no microphone
blaring
my thoughts alone are
glaring
amplified thousand fold,
daring
you to unfold
A contest entry
- round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 2009, 1454 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment with thought and diligence, your words will not discorage me so say what you feel need be said. Thankyou. =]
Comments
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lol...nice body shots here CF... A great way to start off your battle-time dayz.
Welcome to "The UB" (haha..."The Ultimate Battle") zone. Fluid skills; so finely honed. I guess he's gonna comeback in 100 Bar-A-TONE...LOL.
AsIThink...
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wow..
l.o.l...now this is hot, a semi serious mental beatdown!! l.o.l. hope the victim can retaliate..
good work on your first battle piece lady..
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WAR!!!!
its on. let me suit up. i got you. great write. i give you props. waiting for me to unfold. girl you opening up pandoras box messing with me. thats whats up though.
i like it. first swan than you. ok
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this is hot! i really like your flow. good luck in this battle.
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