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Please, don't cry!

Innocent timid lady
    Melts before fiery Sun

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Ice

A contest entry

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  • Lady Michaella
    February 3

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    i love this. excellenly written.very beautiful.
    thanks for entering and good luck in my contest

    -Lemon Bee-


  • Shakes-spear
    February 3
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    Very nice

    I could see the old lady melting! Good job and good luck in the contest! The Shaker


  • fairytalelovestory
    February 3
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    this is beautiful