Visions of lost childhood
Still move within my head
Visions hanging from a rope
Now all dreams are dead
Time echos from the past
With the memories
Time that haunts my soul
Eyes that cannot see
Tears for me I cannot shed
Frozen in the very heart
Tears that will never fall
With pain the rope imparts
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Rhyme Only by piccola.
700 points, ended February 5, 11 entries
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thank you for the entry.
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"Tears for me I cannot shed
Frozen in the very heart
Tears that will never fall
With pain the rope imparts"
as if you were numb from emotion, but yet there's still this underlying pain you can not get rid of.
(thats what i got when i read this)
i like your writing
very nice
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Such angst resonates within this perfect rythm of peotic verse.
I expected nothing less from the poet John
Clear imagery and emotional provoking, another beauty.
With much love and adoration,
Your fan, Nicole
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Wonderful My Friend
This was a very sad and heartfelt poem. It touches this reader's heart. Your words are always so full of emotion. Thank you for always sharing them with your poetry. Hugs and Smiles. You take care dear friend.
Blessings and Love,
Sandy
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A dramatic poem that brings flashes of memory all over and chills, too. 
Ah, sighs and sighs. 
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