Playing with this razor in my
hand. I took it to my wrist
and fell to the floor.
My last words were, now that
i see everything, so clear,
everything to me was a
fantasy. Now that that I'm
leaving. I will finally stop
beleiving. Then everything
will stop bleeding.
I was your key to unlock
this painful reality, but now
your happy I guess you unlocked me.
Then I will always love you for everything,
evey memory..........that is what killed me.
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wow
Wow sad painful great write
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Ah..the story of the life is written in the heartfelt words and touched the depth of the life as well.well done..thanks for sharing..
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n-i-c-e
this is a lot better than the first time i read ur writing..
even though your first ones were good, this is clearly and advancement to your ability to write..
i really enjoyed this -
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thank you.....
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well writen
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