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Smiling

Black
Hole
Idiocy
Said
The
  Wrong
  Thing
Again
Sorry...
Blush
Cry
Tears
Soft
Ones.
Only
Words
No
Tone
  Present
Calming
Down
Remember

Feels
so
  nice

to know
that conversation
real life
can overwhelm
embarrassing words
i'm smiling softly

Author notes

Same as the last one, pretty much

Hope you like it

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  • liduen silver member
    February 5
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    Forgot smiley men (YAY smiley men)


  • liduen silver member
    February 5

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    The rawness in this is amazing. I love how simple, yet heart throbbing this poem is.

    YAY JOHN ADAMS!!!!!