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Autumn

See the light
Through your window open to the pale sun
Glowing like a white jewel
In an endless sea of cerulean blue
Feel the cool, gushing breeze sweep over your skin
Open your mouth
To taste the chilling sweetness of autumn
It calls you out the door in your big red coat and thick warm boots
That rustle the sunset leaves that are falling all around you
Dancing in the air
Cracking in your fingers as you breathe in their musty, sun filled scent
A rough kind of sand
Watch with excited, childish eyes, the first snowflake
Drift lazily down
As the ground shivers at its touch
And the world prepares for winter.

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For my Creative Writing class. I really like it, hope you do too. -_^

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  • kyuuketsuki ai
    February 11

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    Very nice, Hannah. Quite...autumn-y.....it comes to mind...^_^. It's cool you're taking a creative writing class. How's that going? Well, another fantastic write from Hannah*bows*. ^_^ Great Job.
    luvs,
    M

  • Nobodysboy
    February 3
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    love Autumn and Spring