I captured you a day ago,
and brought you into the realm,
which none can grow,
none can run and none can play,
and just like memories,
you fade away.
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Spock
A contest entry
- Cry Me A River by AddictiveTRUTH.
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Comments
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This is very pretty. Only problem is your name needs to be spaced out in the AN so I know who you are.
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aww this is pretty, I like the play in words and how you took it away, thank you for this entry, good luck...MM
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This has a hint of darkness to it which you have expressed well. Thank you for entering this last contest.
Cheryl
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very interesting write. Thank you for entering it in my contest. The imagery was nice and the title was great as well> I'm not great with titles.
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very profound
very well done..
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