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Do you love me too?

 

I still don’t understand why i must love you so,

when I know, that you wont love me too,

and even though, this may not seem true,

I still want you to know. that I will always love you.

And every time I see you,

my heart jumps up and does a flip or two

And when you smile

Everyone disappears around us for a thousand miles

And when you talk my heart goes up and down,

for then I know that you will always be around.

To help me up when I’m down

But even though I know this can never be, dreaming doesn’t cause any harm to /humans or me

I’ve never love someone like this before,

so I don’t know if you

Must love me the way I do

For you are my first love and for that I will never forget, all the wonderful times, I wont regret!

then I know you wont love me so

But I have to let you know that I will always be true.

So if you get a chance to read this, you’ll understand That what I feel for you is true love, and not a one night stand

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  • myerslauraj
    February 4

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    good job

    i really enjoyed reading this. i too have someone that makes me feel this way. but won't ever work. i liked this part the most:
    "And every time I see you,
    my heart jumps up and does a flip or two
    And when you smile
    Everyone disappears around us for a thousand miles"
    anyways good job.