I know you're killing me and
You know I dont mind.
The fine line of reason and excuses
has been blurred
and I cant tell
how long my sanity
will hold up.
god, forgive me.. I have sinned.
I am sinning.
And i dont know
how to stop.
Author notes
-____-; this poem sucks... but whutever 
will post it up anyway for comments and constructive criticism.
Please tell me what you think
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god, forgive me.. I have sinned
I am sinning...
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wow didn't realize i had already read this and commented whoops
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No worries.
Thanks for the comment.
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Its awesome paints an intense picture in mind. great write, the emotions ran deep
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Thanks.
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Love this.
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Thanks
Im glad you enjoyed it.
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i say its really kewl, dark and good
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thank you ^^
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Wow... so deep and dark *evil laugh*
No favorite line; I like them all ^^
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lol thanks
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I like it. It's a very good write how you ever thought it sucked I don't know
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lol thanks
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HEYY! this poem is awesome. it is so beautiful, and i really love this stanza:
"The fine line of reason and excuses
has been blurred"
Its awesome
paints an intense picture in mind. great write, the emotions here ran deep hope things are fine with you 
take care
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^^; Thanks =]
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THIS DOESNT SUCK! ITS AMAZING !
I NLOVE IT!!
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Thanks ^^
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This does not suck. It has emotion and feeling.
Its great in my books.
Favourite part would have to be~
I know you're killing me and
You know I dont mind.
The fine line of reason and excuses
has been blurred
Well done.
Tam xox
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Thanks XD
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First of all this poem doesn't suck! this is really good. Very deep. I like this very much. My sanity is already slowly fading. So I have bet you to the holding up part and god hasn't forgiven me yet I think. o.O and everything you write has meaning and this has meaning behind it. My favorite lines were
"I know your killing me and you know I don't mind.
The fine line of reason and excuses
Has been blurred I can't tell"
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Thanks
Yeah, every line has meaning behind it ^^; Just some lines wont make sense unless you really know me and know whuts goin on with me at the moment Which, idk maybe you do ^^;
Thanks again for the comment. its much appreciated
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You already know I loves you Aiden, and you also already know that I'm here 24/7 if you ever wanna talk and need someone to just listen.
You'll get through it, you have Ray and Seffie and all the other randoms that I don't know there; and the offer's still there if you wanna come visit me in Tassie... cheap prices because of the finical crisis ^^
If you know like... anyone who's been it before ask them how they did. You'd be surprised how many people have been through something the same or similar.
I just wanna see you okay darls, we're all here if you need anything
Claire xx
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I know that you'll be there to listen.. You always have ^^ I just dont know how to talk to people and tell them my feelings and sh-t -.-
And I loves you too ^^
I think I just might come and visit
uhm.. dont really anyone who has or has had the same problem I have. -.- Maybe I'll like.. Join a group here on aP or something. ^^; Who knows? Could work.
^^ Thanks 
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Just rant it out like you did down there *points to Devoted's post* helped me when I was kinda in a similar... spot I guess, different circumstances but meh ^^ Or write it all down, or music it or photo it or draw it (tries to remember her counseling sessions...)
I'm sure if you look around AP there are groups for it, not sure any off the top of me head but I'll keep an eye if you want and ask around ... us lol
And don't worry, my trust in you hasn't gone anywhere. Just worried, that's all.
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Eh, i guess ranting helps a bit O.o
Thanks, lol. Im going to check the groups now. maybe something'll pop up
^^; sorry bout that ^^;;
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TKO
This write does not suck at all.....its different and amazing.
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TKO? O.o
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thanks
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It's okay Aidy, Hannah still loves* you
I know how Aidy stops, Aidy comes to New Zealand with Ray-Ray and Nii Nii and Hannah klaps Aidy upside the head ^^
And is not a sucky poem! Poem is part of Aidy and Aidy does not suck. Aidy ish awesome
*in entirely appropriate ways
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"in entirely appropriate ways"
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^^; Uh.. thanks ^^
^^;; Id rather not travel all the wall to N.Z. to get.. klapped upside the head -_- Believe me, Ray's done enough of that -_____-
Uhm. Thank you ^^;
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I highly doubt she has. Only South Africans can klap people right. Well, other people can but only after they're taught ^^
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^^; riiight. i dont ever want to have a s.african klap me the right way, thank you very much
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How come? It can be a fun experience. If you have a hard head.
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Oh right being klapped upside the head sounds like loads of fun. im uber excited yay
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Aidy is you making fun of my culture and heritage?
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What? O.o No, lol. Im just saying that being hit upside the freakin head doesnt sound fun at all
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Well it depends on who klaps you.
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^^; doesnt it all feel the same? O.o
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Uh, no. If a 3 year old klapped you it'd feel different than if Hannah klapped you. Same as if my brother klapped you, that'd hurt more than if I klapped you (he's stronger than me
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true ^^;;
i prefer not to be klapped by anyone XD
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From my point of view, one's sanity only lasts as long as their trust in friends and loved ones remains intact. With friends there, one can never fall into sanity least they fall as well. When it comes to sinning without the knowledge of how to stop. The only way to stop may be by realizing the patterns of the sins and their meaning to which you are meant to learn in order to understand things. Sins are just confusion put into actions for many, for most it is confusion or insanity taking over. You are merely confused, and need time to understand things.
Wonderful poem, it does not suck, for none of your poems could ever suck.
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Ok, I agree with the idea that sanity holds up as long as they have trust in their friends and loved ones.. But i feel like I'm dragging them down with me or something and shattering THEIR trust in me or whutever and that makes me feel guilty as hell. I mean.. It feels like Im worrying them to death(Claire , Luna ) and breaking their hearts(Rayne
) and pissing them off when I break my promises(Nii, Seth, Atz ) and being a hypocrite(Em ♥ ) and being a horrible example(Izzy ) and not being there for them(Hannah ) and its all too damn much and Im falling and I cant stop myself and it makes me wonder if this life is worth living and this is the only time you will ever see me rant about anything and this rant is done the end. ^^;
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~Looks up at Noir's post where my post was pointed at... and the use of my latin name...~ O.O XD
Then just go and randomly apologize to them for it. :]. From what I can see. You are quite loved, and they feel nothing but love to you. The trust they have for you, and the trust you have for them is strong and will take more than this to break it. I may not know the circumstances to the birth of this poem, but I do know you. Well, enough to know that even if you are going through troubles, we will always be here for you.
You are strong enough to make it through all this, just need to think things through and understand what eludes you. Get me? [:
Don't worry about us. For while you do, we worry for you in turn and nothing gets solved. Let us worry over you for now, and then later on you can worry about what you put us through.
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^^;; Uh.. randomly apologize? ^^;; I guess i could try.. O.o
^^; uhm.. . thanks.. ^^;;
Strong enough? pff. I dunno if I am. Will find out soon, I guess. I get you, no worries
So... worry later about what i put you through.. but dont worry now cause you'll worry and we'll all be worrying?
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Yesh, randomly apologize. It works. They will be confused as hell then you say why, they will say it's alright or playfully tease you, then all will be well :]
Anytime XD I think lol
You are strong enough, just lack confidence... we need to do something about that O.o
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^^;; yeah.. I guess I do lack confidence. Sometimes? idk
confused confused confused
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Sometimes? ~tickles and then randomly stuffs cotton candy in your mouth~ :] You will gain lots once you understand the pros and cons of who you are. Just have faith :]
O.O What's wrong with confusion? XD Gets me out of taking tests! -
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loads of things are wrong with confusion
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~smiles innocently~ I will help as much as I can :] Don't worryS!!!!
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Thanks ^^;
nice
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And thanks for the comment
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i don't think it sucks. i actually like it...i kinda want to go back and read it over and over to disect it and break it down to get every ounce of meaning out of it...haha i sound like a retard...
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^^; Thanks
you dont sound like a retard no worries ^^
-Aiden
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