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Rebirth

As the world turns slowly in the vastness of space,
Every minute it's population increase's with more of the race.
We go on ignorant to the fact's that be,
As we slowly kill the planet located beneath me.
We pollute the air and toxify the ground,
In another million years well we still be around?
Will we have used all the resources this planet has to give,
Or seek out a new planet on which we are to live.

For years we have thought of way's to colonize the moon,
Can we do it before we turn the earth into a vast sand dune?
Instead of thinking of way's to live in a dome,
Why not stop and fix our own home!
Devise a way to close the hole's in our shields,
And clean the ground's of our farmer's field's.
I send out one last call for the planet earth,
Let's give this planet of ours a grand rebirth.

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  • Shelaur
    May 12

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    Well Done!

    Put into words that the layman can understand and yet with a grace that gives the reader something to ponder.


  • StormyDawn
    February 4
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    How true is this...Best of luck