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Feelings

                            Sad ,
                              Angry,
                              Madness,
                          and Jealousy are all  emotions that are negative.
                   
                              Gladness,
                              Happiness,
                              Loyalism,
                                and Faithfulness are all emotions that are positive.
                                  Which of these emotions is what you are feeling right now?



                               

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  • Emotions.. hmm.This was a very good piece that you have written. Shows some good emotions. Thanks for enteirng and best of luck to you in the contest.


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 17
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    A good write with a good question. Sweet and simple, but, a good message.
    God bless.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    February 10

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    HMM, Choices and lines that are set between
    positive and negative spheres.
    You capture this in a focused verse that reflects
    the contrast of wild and caged. Blue


  • Cherrylv
    February 4

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    Well done

    You have clearly shown that you can identify the differences in your emotions and you have included a noc e twist by asking the reader to explore their own feelings.
    Hugs
    Cherry xx