kissed your taste
your hair shinned gold
your such a waste
your heart is cold
you squeeze my wrist
slap on a crown
pretend I exist
not to bring you down
I love you now
I know I should not
breaking a vow
guess I forgot
indulged in your scent
for a little too long
started a quiet descent
to which I don't belong
kissed your taste
I have no doubt
your such a waste
and I can't get you out!
Author notes
boys are dumb and a waste of time!
Please tell me what you think
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I loved the rhymes in this, they seemed effortless and not forced...great flow to this piece too...Great write
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YAY A POEM!
lol is it wrong i mostly check this site just to see your poetry?
Ah, but you never fail to impress. You have great flow and it's always an interesting read. lol Your author's note makes me laugh though - you go from being all mature and sophisticated about your topic to "boys are dumb" I loves it.
Great job!
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i liked this one alot.. great phrasing, great message, and great meter, nice write, thanks for sharing
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