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Twisty

SMASH!  unknown
drasticness in
extreme sides of
me
clawing desperately to
escape yet
finding form for
something so...
beyond...
binds...

weather your present
position is a
storm fraught with
fearing me or
loving her
most...
you've proved
unworthiness...

and now...
with distance
finally you're
beginning to
see and
feel the
need to
publicly declare, more
intimately, in your words,
  "whatever happens,
   u will always
   have a place
   in my
   heart"
murmured amidst
your rambling gambling,
as you
inhale my
dust...
that

haunts

when love so
great remains
unexpressed it
transforms...

and now...
I HATE YOU WITH ALL MY LOVE.

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    February 28
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    I can get the strong vibe here and there are some really good parts, although i don't personally like using capitals in poetry, as it doesn't really cut the grain with me, the words themselves should stand alone and not have to look 'big' so to speak

    good entry. many thanks for entering
    G.x

  • Jsweet
    February 5
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    loved your poem check my page out , hope tohear from you soo