There's a pain in my chest,
It hurts,
I grip my heart,
I'm getting dizzy,
Its hard to breathe,
My heart rate is slowing,
I collapse to my knees,
The ecstasy of pain is intoxicating,
Then my pulse returns,
My mind starts to clear,
I get up,
To see ravenous eyes,
Hungry for information,
I turn around,
And walk away like nothing,
Little do they know,
I was thinking of you.......
its kinda funny about the insperation for this one, if you wanna know jus ask, but well please tell me watcha think
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its sad but i know the feeling I loved the lines
I collapse to my knees,
The ecstasy of pain is intoxicating,
Then my pulse returns,
My mind starts to clear,
I get up,
Your really good -
awwies, this is so sad, i can relate.
i love these lines ♥
'My heart rate is slowing,
I collapse to my knees,
The ecstasy of pain is intoxicating,
Then my pulse returns'
great write ♥ -
awe. this is very heart breaking. I can relate to this very well. It's very painful to think of the one you love.
anyway I understand where your coming from my point of view. My favorite part about this was
"My heart rate is slowing,
I collapse to my knees,
The ecstasy of pain is intoxicating,
Then my pulse returns,"
and you spell ecstasy wrong. you spelled ectasy. it's ecstasy :] other then that this is very sad and very good thanks for sharing this.
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