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Sanity

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Pellucid Mental Sanity








Monopolizing








My Perplexed Mind















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7 words
Option 3

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  • mcope8050
    May 6
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    great,,, i've seen this picture before,,, AWESOME !!! the poetry is deserving of the gold trophy you won,,,nice job


  • Beret55 silver member
    May 1
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    Congrat on your shiney. Well worth a gold.


  • darell
    February 15

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    WOW!

    So thats what it's called now.
    Huh? I need a sedative after reading
    this one. Intense imaging. Golden


  • Bev Hilderman gold member
    February 10
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    Wonderful write.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    February 8
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    Congrats on the gold!!!! Incredible write honey!!!


  • condor gold member
    February 7

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    A wonderful little piece written so well and definately sitting beautifully with the pictures. Sometimes, it seems that our sanity is just hanging in the wind and ready to free fall. Your piece spoke of a soul who is very troubled and unable to understand the frustrations of his own sanity. Perfect and congratulations on the gold. Well deserved.

  • loafy
    February 6
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    should of known... the advantage one has with a big vocabulary!


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 4
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    Your words are always astounding and have a deep and powerful meaning. Magnificent write, dear!


  • Maxboy gold member
    February 4

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    Very deep write sweetie, wonderful for so few words.

    Beautiful....Best wishes in the contest

  • phoenixonfire
    February 3
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    Excellent wording with a strong sense of feeling and pain! ~pri


  • moluv10
    February 3
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    excellent chice of words here. I love it! good luck in the contest.


  • doolie gold member
    February 3

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    Awsome 7 words Cocoa. You did a great job on this.
    Best of luck in the contest. It looks like a winner to me.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 3

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    Sanity is over rated.
    But your poem shows GOLD
    written all over it.



    a sister in poetry


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 3

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    Awesome and such a great thought for
    this contest! You did very well with your
    seven words sweetie! I am sure that you
    will do well with this one. Good luck and
    keep it up! Take care and it's great to read
    you once again!




    Jeremy0826


  • afroqban
    February 3

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    I smell a full cup here...(show off!)

    LOL fill that gold up with wine and gimmie a sip when you get it aiight? Much love to you ma


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    February 3
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    in one word : awesome

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