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I Knew

When you fell,
your regime of lies crashing upon you
like waves upon a seashore,
destroying your fragile shell,
blasting it into fragments,
only to be carried away by the tide,
I merely laughed,
for I knew all along
that this would be your fate -
you are undeserving of my pity,
yet pity I did,
for I could see your future before you,
a path leading to darkness and numbness.

Forever and a day ago,
I felt numb, too;
you told me not to kill my heart,
my emotions,
not to destroy myself with statuesque demeanor;
I was blind,
for I could not see the truth,
hidden by lies and empty promises.
Why should I perform this deed,
when you wanted the honor yourself?

In this moment,
I know now this and more -
I saw you rise before my eyes,
simultaneously watching you fall.
I knew of your ironic demise,
and I pitied you,
even though you tormented my heart;
love never turned to hate -
how could it? -
love was never present -
it is a fool's folly to love,
for love does not exist.

Let the numbness caress you now,
run into its waiting arms, hypocrite,
and show us all what a coward you truly are -
hiding behind lies,
thinking yourself to be above all,
living in your fantasy world;
let us strip away the pretender's mask -
there is nothing -
at most, nothing of worth.

{Nirvana is a medicinal poison -
for some relish it,
immune to its malevolent ways,
and some fall victim to it,
too weak to handle its effects.}

I truly hate you,
and I know that you have fallen,
cast into your own personal Hell by vanity,
a Hell which you fully deserve -
vindication is sickeningly sweet,
yet feels so satisfying -
dare not to look up,
lest the truth blind you.

{May God in Heaven
have mercy upon your unworthy soul.}

Author notes

Some people are stupid.
Very stupid.
Some people are very stupid and very hypocritical.
These people do stupid and hypocritical things.
They tell you not to do something, but they do it to you anyway, and then they do it to themselves.
They are cowards, hiding behind lies and deception.
They are also the people who are too weak to survive their own karma.
This one in particular - let's give him a name. We'll call this very stupid person "Kyle".
So, "Kyle" drove away all of his friends, thinking that he was too good for them.
He met his demise by his own hand, and I saw it coming.
(No, he did not kill himself, as much of a gift to the world that would be. . .)
Still, I pitied him, sympathetic and empathetic as I am.
When it happened and "Kyle" screwed himself over, I laughed hysterically.

Some people are ridiculously predictable.

Today's lesson?
DO NOT BE A KYLE.

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  • Nickey Mouse
    February 3
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    lol Don't be a Kyle.It like this poem it was really good.

  • daydreamer09x
    February 3
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    WHAT?!?!?!
    what the hell happend?

  • Rosen Rot
    February 3

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    lmfao.
    wow.
    "do not be a kyle.' yeah....
    anyway, the poem itself is great, it filled with raw emotion (: