Within my heart, a universe
of feelings without words to free.
My pen released me from my curse.
Emotions penned as poetry,
a doorway for my mind’s release
of feelings without words to free.
With each exuberant caprice
I write the words found in my soul,
a doorway for my mind’s release.
Through giving I find I am whole,
each word a sharing of myself.
I write the words found in my soul.
Exposed, not hidden on a shelf,
I paint the world with boldest strokes
each word a sharing of myself.
No further need for masks or cloaks
within my heart, a universe.
I paint the world with boldest strokes.
My pen released me from my curse.
Author notes
Congratulations Linda 
Thank you for sharing your beauty with the world.
Prompt: Picture/Quote
Picture Credit: www.tut.com (781)
No line limit
Form: Terzanelle There is no meter or syllable count dedicated to this form, but each line should be of similar length or metrical count. The rhyme pattern for this form is: A1B1A2, B2C1B1, C2D1C1, D2E1D1, E2F1E1, F2A1F1A2
A contest entry
- One Year at AP Quickie/Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
603 points, ended February 6, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Would the Following Poets Please Walk This Way-Invite Only by Carolina Moon.
400 points, ended February 6, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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This poem here inspired me a lot, almost made me want to come back fully and start writing again
Well penned
Congrats in the shiny
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Very beautiful
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This is just beautiful. I like the form as well. Keep penning those emotions..for they are a joy to read
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So much for anonymous
I guess I should stop signing my responses 
So glad you enjoyed it...
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This is absolutely beautiful - not sure how I feel about the repetative lines - but all in all a beautiful piece
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Thank you for the kind comments... I've been playing with form poetry lately... some works, some doesn't but it's good for my soul and I hope will bring more structure into my writes... Your thoughts are appreciated
Ken
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