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you just wont know

I beleive in fairytales in a world without hope
maybe I'm in denial, maybe I'm a joke
The fear wakes me up at night to remind me not to choke
on the list of things I wish were gone,
and the the life we just won't know

You thought me full of a childs desires
You took me for a fool
You never see the inner fires
within me or within the mornings jewel
no, you just won't know

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