The dark burning love that we sharred was once so stronge
But now just fadding away deeper into the void of lonlyness
For you I can see have found another far greater then I
And so for this I'll just say my goodbyes
I'll take this gun in my hands pull the trigger until theres nothing left
What did you think
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"The dark burning love that we sharred was once so stronge"
this was my favorite line in the whole poem. it was dark and deep. powerful
great write and i hope to read more of your work -
I love this poem I can really Relate to what your saying
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thats so sad, but very good......wow this poem like made me had a weird feeling some how but love it!!!! great job
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this is so gd i love the last line the best its so gd xxx
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