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Earth Turns on Heaven's Light

Beautiful noon has gone to a soft velvet dark
Just beyond destiny's ephemeral  shores
Winds of fate has ordained this be so embark
Temptress furry rages a squall on the holy fours

As the earth turns on heavens light she abhors
Tempest greedy vanity which feeds on our dream
Lift up in faith trusting the beauty which soars
Returning our loving moon now full body to gleam

Come lay in the circle of my arms to taste the dew
Blessed by the light of the moon in our pleasure
Reason return as fate's wind blows to the golden hue
Let our hearts unite to beat out love's measure

Celebrate with joy the ancient rites of love so bright
Safely sheltered in the radiant silver light

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  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    February 3, 2009
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    Your words so elegantly written; so touching and heartfelt. Beautiful imagery!


  • Luce
    February 3, 2009

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    How wonderfuly you portray our Celebration of the ancient rites of love, and how seltered we are under her radiant silver light
    One has to of been there to know of the feeling and power of our mother as she spins her Circle
    As always a wonderful and blessed write my brother
    Blessed be in her light
    Nick


  • Twylight-Moth
    February 3, 2009

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    breathtaking

    exquisite words of lovemaking and pleasure. It stole my breath. I love the line ' Blessed by the light of the moon... such an image you have painted!
    Love RareFlower


  • azlyn gold member
    February 3, 2009

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    I have a image of this in my mind...so beautiful your words.

    Let the silver light flow and bless all who have eyes to see...and souls to adore.