So happy to know you were on your way.
Never expecting that you weren't meant to stay.
I wonder if you were a boy or girl.
It's sad to think you'll never see this world.
I often think of how our lives would be,
If things were different and you were here with me.
I think of the firsts we missed.
Your first steps, word, smile and kiss.
I never got to hold you or even look into your eyes.
The only thing I got was the question....Why?
Please tell me what you think
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This was so very touching..
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So sad
Very nice, but so sad we never know what the future here holds for us but I believe babies go to be with their Jesus. Lovely poem and
truly so sad.
Blessings
Sharon
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awesome
The child that should have been I was very deeply moved and I really cry ed as I write I feel the hurt of someone who is hurting deeply It was a poem that you can never forget keep writing your young and have a future use your poetry as a tool to comfort and tell others there not alone .You have great potential
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Thank you so much.
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awe I agree 10,000% with this,
abortion is wrong.
I'm really glad I read this.
it's so amazing! well done, keep writing, you're amazing
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Thankyou I appreciate that.
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Well done
Very moving poem. It takes a lot to put this kind of emotion into words. I lost a son because the mother chose not to take care of herself and the fetus. That was over 25yrs ago, and I still have not been able to set to poetry or song. I love the lines I think of the firsts we missed.
Your first steps, word, smile and kiss.
I never got to hold you or even look into your eyes.
The only thing I got was the question....Why?
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That's so sad. I'm sorry you had to go through that. i know that had to be very difficult. Thankyou for your comment and for sharing something so personal with me.
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I don't comment on alot of things... but I had to for this. Aborton is cruel!!! And this poem is a good example for how sad it can be too. You keep up the good work... loved it
~Audri~
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Very touching...emotional, and heartfelt.
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wow this was really sad, i wish there was a little more to read though. im sorry for your loss. My mother suffered through a similar situation. my brother was born but died of sids only a week later. I saw how losing a child can turn a world upside down. Thank you for entering
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That's really sad, I'm sorry if that is a personal truth for you.
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so beautiful emotions and i can feel the pain inside the words, really nice write
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so true, I wrote a poem similiar to that, but different I need to find it. the best line is one that says if things were different and you were here with me. instead of {things) you could say (times)
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Written so well! I empathize. Remember that everything happens for a reason...you will have your embrace soon enough.
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loved it
Expressed as only a mother who had suffered the loss of an unborn child could express it.
LoL.
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Wow. This is truly powerful and moving. It is almost musical to read. The title is perfectly fitting as well. I wouldn't change andything.
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Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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touching
very beautiful!!!
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Beautiful! Very Sad, But Profound. Excellent Flow too BTW
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this is amazing!! its so sad im so sad. its sooooo nice. ur really good. keep up the good work
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Excellent. i almost cried,,, but i'm a big baby so idk if that counts.. but none the least.. wonderfuljob.
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From the title to the last line,this is a lovely poem.Nicely expressed and evoked and full of poignancy.
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very excellent write Misty, I love you I hope you know I here for you.
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