Boundries unveil
as velvet eyes lazily scan
the sapphire kisses
~held~
in heart shaped boxes
that clouds itself in ecsatsy.
I chirp for the symphony
that she places in ribbons
tucked beneath my gifted senses
slowly, rebounding the intensity
that moves around
subtle aura hightened
and so I flutter into a canvas
given to me by my valentine
cuddling the sweet aroma
that repeats itself in passion.
As the moon hugs its stars
I follow the lead,
so that when you open your soul
I am the one holding you.
Author notes
Prompt : I am a bird..you are the sky.-Unknown
20 lines
A contest entry
- I am a bird ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended February 4, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry well worthy of the gold. I can't believe you have no other comments! The only thing I don't quite understand is the valentine reference... ah well...
Very well done.
~ crisstiena
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Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment!! Valentine is a synonym for lover!!
~pri
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love it..thanks..
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Thanks for the gold...
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