lips below your waist
entice me to your fountain
ripples... yours to mine
Author notes
sensing you
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku time! by angelli803.
750 points, ended February 18, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice haiku, very sensual.
All the best.
MJ.
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speechless...
to say everything with few words is a gift... exactly what i was looking for..
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thank you for the comment...
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nice
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thanks nauhty
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You are one of very very few who can make me sigh in so few words...
This one is a keeper
Sigh~ ♥
Lynda
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ohhh thank you lynda ...now i'm blushing
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I had to read this one... has my name. lol.
Though I know this is intended for someone else, it still made me blush. Very sensual penning.
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lol... i thought you might drop in...
yeah someone a long time ago...blush looks good on you.
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