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Awaken

Saturate this twisted loop of frenzied complication.
Achievement.
Motivate.
Awareness of the soul.
Mindless wrapping of the innocent victim
Of time to time recklessness.
Weightlessness,
Randomness.
Inoperable,
Malignant,
Justifiable happiness with
Intent to run and scatter,
Skitter away,
Leave this place.
Romantic ginger foot upon the trophy of
Distant grace and friendly philanthropy.
Malicious,
Impertinent,
Mechanical being
Rubbing up on all that is revocated.
Twist and bend,
Rend and split,
Down the center of immobility.

Author notes

I wrote this at like 7:30 in the morning--and I couldn't get the words down fast enough. Not too sure what it means, but I have an idea.

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