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Whispers

The sweet scent of summer,
pokes up from beneath the snow.
It warms the chill,
the spirit,
and our hearts.
Soon we will be released,
from the ice,
and walk among grass,
and the sound of birds,
welcoming summer.

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Short thing, gotta go to school!

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  • GotLilt
    February 3, 2009

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    hmmmm

    School is out is summer. Is that significant?

    It's not bad.