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Different Arrows

Does he want to be with her?

Of course he does ; he's a man!

Is he just typical of his kind?

Of course he is ; he's a man!

Did you think that he was different?

Of course I did; I am a woman!

A contest entry

What did you think

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    February 28

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    well it's all good questions but it's a bit off-putting with the strange layout and odd punctuation?

    but, i will say many thanks for entering and good luck too.
    G.x

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    February 3

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    Wow, Love this

    Full of human images, and of course, because of that humanity, beautiful in its flowing diction.

    Did you think that he was different?

    Of course I did; I am a woman!

    full of messages, thank you.

  • artie
    February 3

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    More wisdom from gillno

    She loved the dinner thank you, We are 46 years
    and still getting along fine so I guess your
    first line and fifth line answer is yes.
    Artie