Returning home oneday from work,
just as any other day,
but finding out a secret hidden for years.
In a sensual mood,
feeling need for my wife,
holding her in my arms
I began walking upstairs
when she asked.
"What do you think you're doing?"
Without hesitation I told her.
"I want to make love with you and
I want you to make it hurt me good."
Thinking of coarse it would make her laugh
as it often would, however,
I got a revealing surprise.
"That's what she said" was her response.
She was serious with no smile anywhere,
neither upon her lips or in her eyes.
Yes, I still love my ex-wife,
and think of her often.
In a list
A contest entry
- That's what she said! by just sam.
525 points, ended February 13, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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I loved this piece. It wasn't what I expected from the contest, but this was still one of my favourite entries.
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wow...please dont tell me this is true...
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oooh killer ending. i love great endings and this is hot! Well done
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