kissing, euphoric
beneath sun drenched palm trees;
lovebirds fall silent
A contest entry
- Haiku time! by angelli803.
750 points, ended February 18, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this Sugar! You have painted a beautiful picture for us!
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Glad you enjoyed, I usually have a go at haiku's when I am struggling to write.
They make me think
Glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to browse my work.
~sugar~
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Nice
You've painted a wonderful scene. Howard
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Nice.
I wish I was under sun-drenched palm trees right now! Seriously, very romantic words there. Good one, sis.
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Ditto, better than what we have at the moment, which could be more snow.
Always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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awwww loverly write
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Thanks YK I am not the best at haiku's, I have difficulty counting from 1-7 LOL!! Glad you enjoyed appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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I am again in awe with the beauty of your words that paint a canvas of love
Truly wonderful hun
Best wishes to you
Julie
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Thank you hon, glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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very good! my favorite is line 3, excellent!
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a lovely sensual write that is filled with love, and loving, beautifully done.
All the best in the contest
Emma
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A pleasure to have you read Em, glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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A sweet image of Haiku
A romantic picture to get me through the winter.
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Appreciate you commenting, always a pleasure
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Perfection at work here the syllable count is correct and you gave a vivid picture of love in the spring/summer. I love how nature rocks this read....some where on a island in the sun....Novy
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Thank you novy for your fab comment, a pleasure as always
~sugar~
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