Upon the sweetness softly lay,
bittersweets neath morning ray.
Rows of beauty mid the winery,
winter beckons and calls to me.
Taste the snowflakes upon lips,
thoughts lingering of sweet sips.
Blanket of ivory atop the ground,
falls from sky with nary a sound.
Valley lay silent this early morn,
vines glisten as new day is born.
Drink the red from nature's wine,
winter in valley so sweet, divine.
In a list
A contest entry
- Winter Quickie Prompt by Errant Panther.
400 points, ended February 10, 2009, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a very fine interpretive write in regards to the pic. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
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Good Afternoon
Thank you my friend. Always a pleasure to read your comment. Hope the day is a good one.
Take care, Sandy 
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very well written with a solid rhyme pattern to set up the imagery within the piece. "Divine" is spelt incorrectly in the last line, but does not detract from its appeal.
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Thank you again for the bronze and this great comment. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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A most moving poem on nature, and such a wonderull entry for the winter quickie prompt, you have woven magic as always, blessings with love JOhn
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Good Morning John
Your comment is lovely as always and most appreciated. You take care, Blessings to you. Sandy
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Ahhhhhhhh
Such pleasant words that are soft and filled with the yearning of the day and season. The depth of your poems are always amazing. Thank you my friend, for sharing your heart.
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Good Morning Jules
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Always a pleasure. I appreciate this lovely coment. Hugs and Smiles. Take care,
Bless You, Sandy
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wow the imagry here is splendid,it made me shiver, its a beautiful poem, good luck in the contest
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A lovely comment. Thank you for reading. Take care, Sandy
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wonderful
What a great write about winter. So very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the lovely comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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