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Muted

silent screams fall short of blocked ears
I can't reach them
and they wouldn't hear, even if I did

blood drips in time with the
tick-tock of the deafening clock
its the only noise in this hell

Words won't force themselves out
so instead I choke on them
Unsaid; the only person they hurt
is me

My volume has been turned down to mute
so my pain can't seep out
and hurt them

I explode in one ear-splitting scream
but the music I turned up dull volume
drowns me out
and I'm mute once again

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  • MasterFoxFang
    March 28, 2009

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    Great

    another good poem i see and read i love this part the most

    Words won't force themselves out
    so instead I choke on them
    Unsaid; the only person they hurt
    is me

    My volume has been turned down to mute
    so my pain can't seep out
    and hurt them

    I explode in one ear-splitting scream
    but the music I turned up dull volume
    drowns me out
    and I'm mute once again

    great write